Mary Castillo – audiobook narrator and author
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what the life of an editor is really like, check out this three-part blog by Lucia Macro, executive editor at Morrow/Avon.
Day in the Life Part 1
Day in the Life Part 2
Day in the Life Part 3
After reading it, you may not be so bitter that it takes forever for them to get back you on your submission! Well, you can only hope.
Mary
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And if you want a great read, check out my fellow Friday Night Chica, Caridad Piniero’s new release, Sex and the South Beach Chicas!
Best,
Mary
It wasn’t until I turned 30 that I began wearing make-up. Only on the rare occasion during my 20th decade would I smack on full war-paint. I hated shopping, always bought shoes in black or brown, wore the same accessories with every outfit and rarely did my hair. I was a shiny-faced, frizzy haired, blah-dressed mess who – swear to God – didn’t know what a Manolo Blahnik was.
I reasoned that I was too busy with studying, working and writing to waste time on such feminine foolishness. I wanted to cultivate my brain not my look. But when I showed up to work in my boring shoes, black pants and button-down shirt that didn’t quite fit, I felt ungainly and awkward around girls who wore make-up. I realized then that the women who cared about cosmetic brands like Ulta and MAC, were actually right. And I should’ve put some effort at digging into those new shades of lipstick and mascara once a while, too.
But then I turned 30 and became one of those girls. I bought red high heels to wear with my white and red cherry dress that became the dress Will admires in the second chapter of Hot Tamara. I went to a hair stylist on a regular basis, rather than pop into a Fantastic Sams when I was bored on a Sunday afternoon. I truly crossed the threshold when I bought make-up, and actually wore it on a fairly regular basis.
I have really oily skin and there are only a few foundations that do not wreak havoc on my skin so I always do lots of research before buying any new makeup products. For example, recently, I have been on the lookout for a new undereye concealer. My friend told me that there are some fantastic options on the Rank & Style website, so I might have to test out some of the recommendations that she has sent me. Anyway, when I started wearing makeup, suddenly I no longer felt intimidated by women who wore scarves and used handbags that coordinated with their ensemble. I felt like my outside reflected my inside.
When I wrote about this transition through Isa Avellan, my heroine of In Between Men, I wondered if I was breaking the rules of chick lit. But then on second thought, I realized I didn’t care and wrote it anyway. So it was really cool to find Amanda Maria Morrison’s keen and flattering review of IBM in The American-Statesmen. She said, “It’s easy to root for Isa, a devoted mother and champion of immigrant rights who nevertheless has ‘always been the girl with the books pressed to her chest, eyes on the ground.'”
Hurray!!!
And then she added: “In order find her inner vamp – who appears in ghostly visitations as Joan Collins – Isa pays a visit to La Diosa Salon, where her comadres perform an emergency hair-and-makeup procedure. With a wink toward magical-realist fiction and telenovela drama, Castillo describes the post-op moment in which ‘every eye in the salon was wide with astonishment and chests rose and fell with excitement upon seeing a miracle’ – Isa in eyeshadow.”
God, I’m shameless in that I love a great review.
Thanks, Amanda!
This morning Google Alert dropped this column off in my in box: Is the Chick-Lit World Ready for 9/11 Plot?
Reading it set off a flurry of thoughts about my own work and the brouhaha over the question if chick lit was dead.
When I look back at In Between Men, I sometimes wonder if I missed an opportunity with the storyline about Alex’s brother. I hinted that he was serving in Iraq and at the lowest point in the story, they receive news that he might be dead. Should I have gone into darker waters with the brother and his wife, June? Would my readers have put the story down because they didn’t want the stuff they see on the evening news? Or, would the brother and June upstage Isa and Alex?
But then I thought about the interview my agent, Jenny Bent gave two months ago that set off a firestorm among chick lit authors. In the article, Jenny quoted a book buyer who told her that chick lit sales were down and it was officially dead. Well, are sales down because it is no longer relevant? Do we need to shake things up and tackle, for example, a 9/11 plot? Five years later, are we ready as readers and authors?
I’m now thinking that there will be a sequel to In Between Men, but with June and Alex’s brother. Could there be a happily-ever-after between a man who almost died in Iraq, and his wife? In my fictional world, the answer is an emphatic yes. I deal with the stuff on the evening news by writing stories that end happily ever after. Otherwise, the sheer overwhelming number of problems and heartbreak would cripple me. Perhaps that makes me a sell-out or an annoying optimist. But when millions of readers pick up books like mine, I must not be the only one.
Still, I’d like to know what you think.
Best,
Mary
Marcela Landres interviewed me about my business plan in her September newsletter. If you think it’s not for you, think again if you want to be a successful novelist (e.g published more than once). Everyone’s journey is different though, so make sure that you talk to professional business plan writers like wimgo to help them find the right formula for you. Although you can learn a lot from this interview.
Here are the parts of my business plan model that I discussed in Marcela’s interview:
Mission Statement: think of this as your calling to writing as opposed to, “I want to be a NYT bestselling author and makes tons of cash.” Are you writing to entertain women, to inspire African American teens, to bring justice to the bad guys? Your mission is what inspires your work.
Reader profile: My first draft of this section was inspired by one of my more memorable rejection letters. The agent wrote that she did not imagine Hot Tamara finding a place in the competitive marketplace. But I did. I imagined a young woman; she could be Latina, white, Asain … didn’t matter. Anyway, this young woman had a job, a car, maybe she shared an apartment with friends or a boyfriend or she was married. My link to her was that she loved books and she wanted a story and a heroine who had similar issues like her. I pictured her on her lunch break, sitting at a table under a tree reading my book and wishing she didn’t have to go back to her desk because she was dying to know what happened next.
Once I sold Hot Tamara into the competitive marketplace (sorry, couldn’t stop myself), I did my homework. I stopped women in bookstores, read articles about book sales, hunted down Latina sororities and networking organizations … you name it. And I still update this profile because I want each new book to find more of these readers.
Goals/Strategy: Before I sold my first book, this section had my top ten list of agents, my B-list, etc. I had their names, their recent sales (culled from PublishersMarketplace.com and acknowledgments from books I thought were similar to mine) as well as the dates when I had sent my query and its status. Like I said I’m not a Virgo, just a hard-working Capricorn with a one-track mind.
When I sold and then continued to sell books, this is where I keep track of my proposals and projects. Also, when I’m slugging it out with one project and get a new idea, this is where I’ll put that idea so it stays out of my head. But the strategy and long range planning have become the most important piece of this section. This is how I keep track of my communication with my agent; how I plan to promote my next book; and how I plan updates to my website. Becoming an author is really like becoming a business owner. It’s a full-time job to try and achieve success. From marketing to actually writing the content, there are a lot of things to do. As I begin to sell more books, it’s important for me to try and work out the financial side of my business. I need to be able to predict what the sales will be like to see whether this career is going to be profitable or not. One of my friends actually mentioned that I should consider looking into financial planning software. She said that she uses it for her business and it’s great for helping her to plan out their financial future. Whilst I’m not running a corporate organization, this sort of sensitivity analysis may still be useful to help me plan out my finances for my business. Maybe I’ll look into that, it could help me to grow my business even more.
Anyway, I also write my ideas down to help me stay on track. Otherwise, I’d forget and drift aimlessly and not be able to write and you would never discover if Tamara and Will have children. Oops, did I let that one slip? So sorry.
heh heh heh
Oh come on, you know I love you!
Going back to the topic at hand, even if you’re not yet published, consider creating your plan now. It will only make your queries and proposals stronger. But even more important, it can be a source for inspiration when that rejection letter appears in your mailbox, or when you can’t write another word of your work-in-progress.
Best,
Mary
I know I had no business going there but I was poking around the reviews of my books and found the nastiest, mean-spirited review I’ve had so far. The reviewer seemed so angry at having read my book, it was as if I’d gone to her house and pooped on her lawn. I’ve read some really awful books in my day but I never took them personally. I just figured they weren’t my cup of tea and moved on.
And then I found a blog dedicated to hating Rachael Ray. Apparently if you hate her, you can join and talk crap about her all the live long day. Why would anyone want to spend time and energy being mean?
I could pretend not to understand where they’re coming from, but sadly I do. I’ve been jealous of writers who have had more success than I have. I’ve had that, “why-not-me?” feeling when I read about someone’s six-figure deal in Publisher’s Weekly. And yes, I’ve read books by people I know and thought, wow, that wasn’t so great! But I would never, ever talk crap about them, or go on Amazon and tell potential readers that someone’s work was a piece of trash. Perhaps the difference between me and mean people is that I know how much of a writer’s soul goes into her work. I know what it takes to become someone like Rachael Ray and I don’t begrudge her for all of her hard work.
Well, I feel much better having gotten that off my back. By the way, if you hate my books, it’s cool. I probably wouldn’t like yours if you had actually written one. (evil laughter)
By the way, as soon as my editor approves my new novella, “Till Death Do Us Part,” I’m going to record a mini reading on this blog.
And if you haven’t yet, check out Avon Fan Lit!
than Dana Diamond did on her blog, A Writer’s Best Friend.
She talks about fear and putting it perspective. It’s a must-read!
Mary
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For you writers out there: have you ever written a scene that made you cry? I have, but this time it was worse than ever. I couldn’t stop. Hell, I couldn’t see the damn screen! But I had to keep going because the sociopath/writer in me hissed, “this is good … this will make it better!”
You see, this scene involved a mother having to leave her child. Now that I have my Little Dude – who is a year old! – books, movies, TV shows, and even commercials that portray children are now filled with emotional landmines. My husband is just as bad. There is a commercial about a battery that looks similar to the ones provided by EarPros, which are small enough to fit a deaf child’s hearing aid. And then they show the face of the child light up when he hears rain for the first time. (See? I’m already choking up just thinking about it.) Last night when that commercial came on, my husband was choking back his tears.
A good writer must elicit an emotional reaction from their readers. If not, how would someone get through a 500-page book? People want to feel something when they read a write-up. In that way, they will identify themselves with the writing.
However, when my editor told me she teared up while reading one of my scenes, I puffed with pride. Making a reader cry – especially an editor who’s probably read it all – is even better than making her laugh.
Sick! And yet, satisfying to my ego.
So I have to ask, what scenes in books and/or movies have made you cry?
Revisions to Switchcraft (working title, TBR July 2007) were humming along nicely until I hit some detours in chapter 12. Chapter 13 had a few bumps but nothing major. Chapter 14 was a smooth, empty highway and then I spun out on black ice at chapter 15. Pieces flew everywhere – some dialogue here, some action over there and a storyline that’s now DOA. The real stuff is somewhere in the mess. If I look close enough I can see where the pieces fit together.
Sigh. You’d think after six books (three of which will never see the light of the day…they were “learning experiences”), I’d have this book-writin’ thing figured out. But Switchcraft is my greatest challenge because it is my most emotionally true story. There is so much of my real feelings in these characters that it’s scary to think that you’ll be reading it! With each book, I’ve had to stretch and push and fight to pull the story out of my head and onto paper. But this one keeps asking for more each time I sit at my desk.
I’m probably making a bigger deal than it really is … I’m not complaining! To quote That’s Queen Bitch To You: “I don’t suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it.”
P.S. If you’re curious as to what the hell I’m talking about, follow this link to my Let’s Talk letter.